http://jadesfire.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] jadesfire.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] crabby_lioness 2007-06-28 04:49 pm (UTC)

Ooh, I like this, a lot. You've got the Master's voice really nicely and you paint the scene really vividly.

And I love the sibling rivalry/blood feud comparison - works perfectly.

Nice work :)

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