I don't know whether or not this needs fixing, but saying "New York" for the third time seems odd. Though I just ran it though my head and changed the Doctor's modulation of those three sentences and it worked, so I don't know.
He gets hung up on a word sometimes. Remember "thumb" in Tooth and Claw?
Before reading this, I never realized that the Doctor heard Jack die. And then I had to go watch that relevant section of "The Parting of the Ways" and OMG he does.
It was just the other side of an interior wall. Both gunfire and the sound of a 175lb dead weight slamming into that wall would have been both audible and all too identifiable.
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He gets hung up on a word sometimes. Remember "thumb" in Tooth and Claw?
Before reading this, I never realized that the Doctor heard Jack die. And then I had to go watch that relevant section of "The Parting of the Ways" and OMG he does.
It was just the other side of an interior wall. Both gunfire and the sound of a 175lb dead weight slamming into that wall would have been both audible and all too identifiable.
Finished! Yay!