Hi! Wow - this has been a marathon. Nice to read the whole thing though (though could probably recite the start) - all flows beautifully. Guess Ianto does the cleaning then :)

And O-O - Ianto and Owen possibly starting to work TOGETHER? There's the *real* sign of the end of the world :)

Some proofing I missed

Yvonne Hartman isn't it? Not Yvonne Hartmen.

Missing " after "Let's see. Here's the sound file on his ship.

Good luck with the next part!